We're sorry, but this application has been rejected. While your character notes are extensive enough, there needs to be more of a focus on explaining terms and giving a general overview of plot, character intent and interaction. Essentially, less specifics and more of a feel for the character and the circumstances he lives in.

Additionally, there are some grammar problems that make the app hard to follow, especially in terms of maintaining tense. As the application reflects the ability to write in-game and DDD is primarily text-based, the standard of writing shown is important.