thekidsare0kay: (d0wn)
thekidsare0kay ([personal profile] thekidsare0kay) wrote in [community profile] ddd_news 2012-04-27 12:02 am (UTC)

Rejected

I'm sorry, but this application has been rejected. I found that the overall writing level wasn't quite up to par, making it difficult to get a sense of Gwen's character from your samples. I would also like to see a more balanced personality section. There's a lot in the application about Gwen's positive traits, but no negative ones, making her come off as a bit unbalanced as a character. Please feel free to reapply for either this character or another one!

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