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100% fresh beff ([personal profile] irrigo) wrote in [community profile] ddd_news 2012-09-17 03:37 am (UTC)

REVISIONS

While there isn't a minimum word count for it, we would like to see a more substantial personality section! Although you've given us a good idea of how Haibara acts, we'd like a more in-depth description of her motivations and her internalised personality (how does she feel about her past or her present?) as well as any noticeable changes or developments her personality may have undergone during her time in the game, e.g. have the Family Virus or the friends she has made on the community caused her to become a little more open, etc.?

Also, please note that due to the complaint we received regarding your general lack of activity, your application may remain pending until the revisions for your Kurama application are also submitted and reviewed.

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