But I HAVE paid attention to canon, to him and how he speaks. It's one of my favorite anime/manga and he's my favorite character! It's just pretty hard to write down on the internet sometimes, I guess.

And keep in mind that his characterization changed with each saga. I was basing this off of the earliest Vegeta, who was a little more calm and less perpetually grouchy and prone to anger than the later Vegeta. Is there any way for you to reconsider or for me to retype my first and third person entries?