ext_12928 ([identity profile] dreamoflight.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ddd_news 2011-03-03 01:26 am (UTC)

Rejected

We're sorry, but this application has been rejected. We did not get a strong sense of accurate character voice from your samples; we would recommend paying closer attention to the manner in which he speaks and thinks. In addition, we'd recommend breaking your app up with paragraph breaks; long blocks of text become difficult to read and hard to follow. Please feel free to reapply!

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