While your general grasp of Aradia's character appears to be quite sound, we are concerned about some of the points raised in her character notes. Even though you are indeed starting Aradia off in her pre-death days, when someone applies for a character from a canon as complex and wibbly-wobbly timey-wimey temporally malleable as Homestuck, particularly a character that ultimately has a greater understanding of events than others, we need to be sure they understand what's going on so that they'll be able to interact with other castmates etc. successfully.

Additionally, as a further query, will Aradia be using DDD as a memo during play insted of a site in a browser? The format you have used seems more like a sample from IC chat rather than typical Livejournal gameplay.