I don't need this, really I don't. It's not as if my life is unexciting... There's been a dragon, a griffin, that witch Morgause...the troll.
The troll was rather hilarious, I suppose, I don't think I've seen Father look so horrified in his life.
Speaking of which...it's occured to me I've never had as many near death experiences as I have these last tree years.
If I didn't know better, I'd think Merlin had something to do with it. Wouldn't surprise me actually, to find out he's bad luck, his looks certainly seem to be a product of it.
But then...
Well...there's someting about him. I mean he's actually give me good advice...once.
Still, I've never had a servant cause me this much trouble.
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God, have mercy, what next.
What NEXT?
I don't need this, really I don't. It's not as if my life is unexciting... There's been a dragon, a griffin, that witch Morgause...the troll.
The troll was rather hilarious, I suppose, I don't think I've seen Father look so horrified in his life.
Speaking of which...it's occured to me I've never had as many near death experiences as I have these last tree years.
If I didn't know better, I'd think Merlin had something to do with it. Wouldn't surprise me actually, to find out he's bad luck, his looks certainly seem to be a product of it.
But then...
Well...there's someting about him. I mean he's actually give me good advice...once.
Still, I've never had a servant cause me this much trouble.
Or that I've been so friendly with.
Rejected