I actually got in trouble today. I couldn’t believe it. Those idiots actually thought it was my fault. It wasn’t, you know. It was that Dennis Bishop boy who turned up last week. He thinks he’s tough but I’ll show him. I’ll teach him to get me in trouble.
They stopped me going outside because of him. Not that I really mind. I’ll just plot my revenge. We’re going out into the countryside next weekend. I’ve been told there’s a cave we can explore. I’ve been told we’re going to be in groups. I think I’ve got a plan for my new friend Dennis.
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I actually got in trouble today. I couldn’t believe it. Those idiots actually thought it was my fault. It wasn’t, you know. It was that Dennis Bishop boy who turned up last week. He thinks he’s tough but I’ll show him. I’ll teach him to get me in trouble.
They stopped me going outside because of him. Not that I really mind. I’ll just plot my revenge. We’re going out into the countryside next weekend. I’ve been told there’s a cave we can explore. I’ve been told we’re going to be in groups. I think I’ve got a plan for my new friend Dennis.
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