[The video turns on to an image of Megatron, his midsection patched up and a slightly weary look to his face.]
Well, it has certainly been an interesting orbital cycle, for lack of a better word. We hadn't been expecting to be attacked by Optimus at Arch-Ayr, though it was hoping too much that they wouldn't also be on the track of forgotten fuel deposits as we were.
[He vents a small sigh and shakes his head.]
I am glad that we came out victorious, the fuel deposits will help greatly. But I do worry about some of our fighters. Our goal is to fight for our freedom, but it seems many of our warriors are becoming more and more enamored by the fight itself then the goal in the long run. They are becoming quite enthusiastic, and it worries me that such enthusiasm will lead to battle choices that could leave their teammates bringing home parts and pieces instead of comrades.
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Well, it has certainly been an interesting orbital cycle, for lack of a better word. We hadn't been expecting to be attacked by Optimus at Arch-Ayr, though it was hoping too much that they wouldn't also be on the track of forgotten fuel deposits as we were.
[He vents a small sigh and shakes his head.]
I am glad that we came out victorious, the fuel deposits will help greatly. But I do worry about some of our fighters. Our goal is to fight for our freedom, but it seems many of our warriors are becoming more and more enamored by the fight itself then the goal in the long run. They are becoming quite enthusiastic, and it worries me that such enthusiasm will lead to battle choices that could leave their teammates bringing home parts and pieces instead of comrades.
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