Could we please see another third person sample? We'd like to see something that reflects the traits listed in her personality section, rather than something ship-focused.
Hibiki jogged along the shoreline of Kanon Town, keeping her breathing steady. She was very much one of those people who liked to exercise a lot, and her condition showed it. Still, her mind was on the previous fight, with Kanade almost losing faith in herself. She had made sure to convince her that she was doing the right thing, and she paused in her jogging to breathe a little.
"Those other Cures know what they're doing, so I need to do my best too," reasoned Hibiki to herself as she replayed the events while making a turn into the in-roads of Kanon Town. It scared her to know that Precure could lose a lot of their powers if they didn't believe in themselves and yet, to believe in someone was also a strength. She sighed as she turned towards Hummy. "Hummy, what do you think I should--?"
Hibiki groaned and facepalmed at the sight of Hummy just passed out, the Fairy Tones pulling her along. "Silly cat," she grumbled with a fond grin on her face. "All right. We know what to do, and people to call upon if we're in trouble. C'mon world, lets see what you've got! I'll be letting my girls down if I don't make this today!"
Hibiki lowered her fist from her shout as she grinned into the morning sunlight. "C'mon then. I'm going to take everything on, and help my friends out when I can. Count on it."
She briefly wondered if she should let her other friends in on this, since Hummy didn't say anything about keeping her secret a secret, and yet, being a Precure sent a thrill up her spine, like a good game of soccer or something similar. It was exciting, thrilling, and ate into her homework time which she appreciated a little despite her average grades. "Naw," remarked Hibiki to herself. "Can't tell the others about this. They'd never believe me anyhow..."
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Hibiki jogged along the shoreline of Kanon Town, keeping her breathing steady. She was very much one of those people who liked to exercise a lot, and her condition showed it. Still, her mind was on the previous fight, with Kanade almost losing faith in herself. She had made sure to convince her that she was doing the right thing, and she paused in her jogging to breathe a little.
"Those other Cures know what they're doing, so I need to do my best too," reasoned Hibiki to herself as she replayed the events while making a turn into the in-roads of Kanon Town. It scared her to know that Precure could lose a lot of their powers if they didn't believe in themselves and yet, to believe in someone was also a strength. She sighed as she turned towards Hummy. "Hummy, what do you think I should--?"
Hibiki groaned and facepalmed at the sight of Hummy just passed out, the Fairy Tones pulling her along. "Silly cat," she grumbled with a fond grin on her face. "All right. We know what to do, and people to call upon if we're in trouble. C'mon world, lets see what you've got! I'll be letting my girls down if I don't make this today!"
Hibiki lowered her fist from her shout as she grinned into the morning sunlight. "C'mon then. I'm going to take everything on, and help my friends out when I can. Count on it."
She briefly wondered if she should let her other friends in on this, since Hummy didn't say anything about keeping her secret a secret, and yet, being a Precure sent a thrill up her spine, like a good game of soccer or something similar. It was exciting, thrilling, and ate into her homework time which she appreciated a little despite her average grades. "Naw," remarked Hibiki to herself. "Can't tell the others about this. They'd never believe me anyhow..."
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