Third person sample Take II: Estelle knew what it was like when she had been cooped up in the castle. The extent of her adventures then had been limited to the books she found in the castle library, and the tales of other towns that Flynn told her. She had always longed to visit those places; meet new people; experience new cultures! But she was a Princess; heir to the throne of the Empire - frankly she would have been happy if her fellow heir Ioder were the Emperor. That would mean she would have more of an opportunity to explore and travel. Maybe.
Her meeting with Yuri was purely by chance, but as it turned out, they both had - at the time - the same goal: leaving the castle. Even after they accomplished the goals they set out to do, Estelle had her first taste of freedom. She could spread her wings and truly experience the lands Flynn had always told her about. That was why...when Yuri told her to decide what she wanted to do... to go back to the castle with Flynn, or to continue traveling with him and the others... she chose to continue traveling.
She never wanted to stop. Her happiest days, when she looked back and reflected, were traveling alongside Yuri, Repede and the others. Even when she was afraid, as long as her friends were with her, she knew it would turn out all right. Free from the castle's almost oppressive atmosphere, she could help people personally. That was all right, wasn't it? Surely there was no harm... so why did she feel at times, like she was abandoning her duties by selfishly traveling and enjoying her days with her friends?
She couldn't answer that one; not yet at least. But if they traveled more, Estelle was certain that eventually she would find the answers she needed.
[ooc also erm! If there's anything in -specific- that might be wrong if this sample doesn't work, let me know and I can revise :3]
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Estelle knew what it was like when she had been cooped up in the castle. The extent of her adventures then had been limited to the books she found in the castle library, and the tales of other towns that Flynn told her. She had always longed to visit those places; meet new people; experience new cultures! But she was a Princess; heir to the throne of the Empire - frankly she would have been happy if her fellow heir Ioder were the Emperor. That would mean she would have more of an opportunity to explore and travel. Maybe.
Her meeting with Yuri was purely by chance, but as it turned out, they both had - at the time - the same goal: leaving the castle. Even after they accomplished the goals they set out to do, Estelle had her first taste of freedom. She could spread her wings and truly experience the lands Flynn had always told her about. That was why...when Yuri told her to decide what she wanted to do... to go back to the castle with Flynn, or to continue traveling with him and the others... she chose to continue traveling.
She never wanted to stop. Her happiest days, when she looked back and reflected, were traveling alongside Yuri, Repede and the others. Even when she was afraid, as long as her friends were with her, she knew it would turn out all right. Free from the castle's almost oppressive atmosphere, she could help people personally. That was all right, wasn't it? Surely there was no harm... so why did she feel at times, like she was abandoning her duties by selfishly traveling and enjoying her days with her friends?
She couldn't answer that one; not yet at least. But if they traveled more, Estelle was certain that eventually she would find the answers she needed.
[ooc also erm! If there's anything in -specific- that might be wrong if this sample doesn't work, let me know and I can revise :3]
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