APPLICATIONS -- 2010; 001

[tripled_mods]

THIS APPLICATIONS POST IS CLOSED. Please direct your attention to the new one here!

Comments

Re: PENDING: second sample

[rezo-eris.livejournal.com]

First Person:

There are many things in this universe that I hate. One of them is having conflicted feelings on anything! But conflicted is how I feel about having Nappa as my partner. On one hand, his destructive nature and immense power allows me to not use much of my own energy so that I may save it for when it's awesome power is truly needed. On the other hand, impatience and wrecklessness could be crippling to our job performance. Far too many times I've seen Nappa rush into something without thinking even the slightest bit ahead!

But he does do alot of kissing up to me. He knows that I am a Saiyan Elite and it's obvious that he fears my superior strength, as he should. All I have to do is keep him in line and he will obey any order I give him; he'll be my complete tool! Feh! Under my orders, I hope he won't show any stupidity or weakness. I'd HATE having to babysit one of my own kind.

Rejected

[dreamoflight.livejournal.com]

We're sorry, but this application has been rejected. We feel you do not show an accurate grasp of character voice, and would recommend reviewing canon and paying particular attention to how he speaks. Please feel free to reapply!

Re: Rejected

[rezo-eris.livejournal.com]

But I HAVE paid attention to canon, to him and how he speaks. It's one of my favorite anime/manga and he's my favorite character! It's just pretty hard to write down on the internet sometimes, I guess.

And keep in mind that his characterization changed with each saga. I was basing this off of the earliest Vegeta, who was a little more calm and less perpetually grouchy and prone to anger than the later Vegeta. Is there any way for you to reconsider or for me to retype my first and third person entries?

[dreamoflight.livejournal.com]

Unfortunately, writing it down on the internet is the most important part for an internet-based roleplay.

I'm aware of where you're taking him from, but we simply don't feel that the voice is accurate. In addition, although we recognize that characters change over the duration of a series, we would recommend adding that description into the personality section you provided, rather than bringing it in at the end.

You may reapply for Vegeta, the same way anyone who is rejected the first time may app a second time. And lastly, a word of warning-- it's really very rude to use a clearly angry icon at a moderator when asking for special treatment.