APPLICATIONS -- 2010; 001

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Re: PENDING: second sample

[gazlenemembrane.livejournal.com]

First Person: (Video Log)

[You see a scary girl with short purple hair and squinted eyes was busy around her brother's computer. She was messing around with it as she worked her fingers on the keyboard]

That should teach him not to steal the last slice of pizza...

[Quacks can be heard on the computer]

Ducks? I didn't want this to happen!

[Teeth grits together]

Stupid Dib. Must be some stupid firewall he put up!

[Computer voice] Incoming transmission

[Scoffs] Whatever, might as well tell Dib he caught a virus...

[Starts walking away]

[Computer voice] CONGRATULATIONS!! YOU HAVE WON A FREE VIDEO GAME SYSTEM!!!

[Stops, then turns around] Wait, what?

[Computer voice] YOU HEARD ME, SCARY LITTLE GIRL!! YOU HAVE WON A FREE VIDEO GAME CONSOLE!! ALL YOU GOT TO DO IS FILL OUT THIS APPLICATION TO A WEBSITE YOU MUST BE DEDICATED TO IN ORDER TO GET IT!!!

[Places hand on her chin] Hmm, just one little application, then I go get my free game.

[Dashes off to type in all her information] If it gets me away from Dib, I'm okay with it....

Rejected

[dreamoflight.livejournal.com]

We're sorry, but this application has been rejected. Overall, we did not get a good sense of a unique character voice; the samples given were rather flat, and in addition, we would recommend reviewing your application for grammar mistakes such as tense changing before submission. Please feel free to reapply!