APPLICATIONS -- 2010; 001

[tripled_mods]

THIS APPLICATIONS POST IS CLOSED. Please direct your attention to the new one here!

Comments

Rejected

[wearsmanymasks.livejournal.com]

I'm sorry, this application has been rejected. While fanon and headcanon are useful tools in expanding a character in RP, they are up to the discretion of the player and as such are irrelevant in applications. Much of the information you have supplied for von Karma is very interesting, and will work well within the game, but we would prefer applicants to concentrate on canon information when detailing their character notes.

Additionally, there are a number of spelling errors in your samples. One or two is within the boundaries of typical error, but I count at least four in your first-person sample alone. For a character as intelligent and exacting as von Karma, more care would need to be taken with spelling and grammar.

However, your application is otherwise well-written. Please feel free to apply again!

Re: Rejected

[pess-in-suits.livejournal.com]

Alright, thank you for the advice. Canon info on Manfred is rather lacking, but I'll be sure to do my best! (And, like, triple check my spelling. That'll teach me to app in a rush, orz!)

I reapply to the same place once I've completed my new app, correct?

[wearsmanymasks.livejournal.com]

Yeah, that's right! You just put it in the same post as all the other applications.

[pess-in-suits.livejournal.com]

Aight, thanks! I'll get that up ASAP.