What the hell. I've been refreshing this thing off and on for hours. I was trying to go to bustyasianchicks.com, but it looks like I can't do that. I'm just gonna go out on a limb and assume this has something to do with a trickster.
But ducks, man? Really? That's not even funny. I usually like this guy's style, but this is just pathetic.
Whatever. I'll play along.
Third Person:
Dean stops in his tracks when he sees the glimmer of something out of the corner of his eye. He's never really been one to pick through a garbage can and take trash out of it, but when he realizes what it is that caught his eye, he quickly finishes off the rest of his hamburger before wiping his hands on his jacket and reaching in after it.
What he pulls back out is a wallet. It's a bright, bright pink. Fake leather with a some keys attached. It smells heavily of perfume, which Dean's not really fond of, but he has to smile broadly once he opens it up and sees the ID crammed behind a plastic cover.
She's a blond, and her address it right there. Apparently, she lives right around the corner too.
What Dean would usually do when he finds a wallet, he doesn't do. He doesn't dare take the cash and credit cards, but instead calls Sam.
After waiting a few seconds, he hears his brother's voice on the other end and says, "hey, Sammy. I'm gonna catch you later. I just found this hot chick's wallet."
He can practically hear his brother rolling his eyes, but still adds, "yeah, she's legal, dude." And then a pause. "Uh huh. I bet I'm getting a reward, too. If you know what I mean."
With a quick flick of the wrist, he closes his phone before stuffing it back into his pocket and heading off in the other direction.
I'm afraid the minimum first-person word count is 100 and this is only 68 - you don't need to write an entirely new one, just lengthen it enough to hit the word count - but we'd still like to ask for a second third-person sample, please, with more of a focus on introspection.
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First Person (entry type):
What the hell. I've been refreshing this thing off and on for hours. I was trying to go to bustyasianchicks.com, but it looks like I can't do that. I'm just gonna go out on a limb and assume this has something to do with a trickster.
But ducks, man? Really? That's not even funny. I usually like this guy's style, but this is just pathetic.
Whatever. I'll play along.
Third Person:
Dean stops in his tracks when he sees the glimmer of something out of the corner of his eye. He's never really been one to pick through a garbage can and take trash out of it, but when he realizes what it is that caught his eye, he quickly finishes off the rest of his hamburger before wiping his hands on his jacket and reaching in after it.
What he pulls back out is a wallet. It's a bright, bright pink. Fake leather with a some keys attached. It smells heavily of perfume, which Dean's not really fond of, but he has to smile broadly once he opens it up and sees the ID crammed behind a plastic cover.
She's a blond, and her address it right there. Apparently, she lives right around the corner too.
What Dean would usually do when he finds a wallet, he doesn't do. He doesn't dare take the cash and credit cards, but instead calls Sam.
After waiting a few seconds, he hears his brother's voice on the other end and says, "hey, Sammy. I'm gonna catch you later. I just found this hot chick's wallet."
He can practically hear his brother rolling his eyes, but still adds, "yeah, she's legal, dude." And then a pause. "Uh huh. I bet I'm getting a reward, too. If you know what I mean."
With a quick flick of the wrist, he closes his phone before stuffing it back into his pocket and heading off in the other direction.
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