I found Scabbers in my room again. I'm not sure if it's cus Ron's rubbish at looking after him or if it's a rubbish attempt at scaring me. Which, if it is that, he could choose something better than a rat that's lived here about as long as I have. Not that Scabbers could scare anyone, I bet, except maybe Ron. But then he's scared of spiders so scaring him's not that hard.
I'd better go give him back. Even though I could look after him way better. Don't want mum throwing a fit cus I "stole" him. 'sides, it'll be funny to see how Ron messes up once he's at Hogwarts and doesn't have me or Mum to fix it.
We're sorry, but this application has been rejected. We feel that the voice is not accurate to the period in time you're taking Ginny from; while it's true that she would have been more talkative than we saw in the books from Harry's point of view, your samples seem to show a level of self-assurance that she did not develop until later on in canon. We suggest considering carefully how she changed over time, as well as showing various moods in your samples. Please feel free to reapply!
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I'd better go give him back. Even though I could look after him way better. Don't want mum throwing a fit cus I "stole" him. 'sides, it'll be funny to see how Ron messes up once he's at Hogwarts and doesn't have me or Mum to fix it.
Rejected